Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 9. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 17, 2021

Week 9 Story: Devastation in Shangri-La

The sun shone, the birds sang, and the gentle breeze swept through her hair.

Everything should have been perfect, and yet, there was nothing that was.

Queen Kausalya sighed as she started walking again. She would have loved to take the time to enjoy the paradise that was Shangri-La, the fabled land of peace, yet she knew that she did not have the time to wait. For, her son was waiting for her. Or rather, she hoped he was. Thus the fact that nothing was perfect.

Kausalya reflected that, at the very least, the sadness of her situation allowed her to finally glimpse this beautiful land. Just in the few hours since she, Bharata, and the villagers crossed the border into Shangri-La, she had seen beautiful butterflies, ducks, leopards, and even kangaroos, all living in harmony. Never before had she seen predator and prey living together like that. But, her son was here, and so she could not allow herself to marvel at the impossibility of it all.

"Queen Kausalya! We are taking a rest break for the children!" Bharata yelled to her. It was just as well, as her feet were beginning to grow sore. Kausalya sat down on a smooth rock by the burbling brook they had been following, sighing when the pressure was relieved from her aching feet. She sat for a few minutes enjoying the sunshine, until all of a sudden water was splashed onto her leg.

Kausalya leapt up, startled. "What was that?" she wondered. Looking into the water, she was surprised to find a pod of the most breathtaking seahorses swimming through the water. She smiled, for she knew that the magic of Shangri-La was the only reason she was able to see these marvelous creatures.

Once everyone had been given time to rest, the group continued on. No one wanted to wait for long, Kausalya knew, for everyone was eager to get to their destination. After all, it was for love of their true king, Rama, that they all left on this long journey. No one, however, was as ready for Rama to return with them than Kausalya was. And, she also knew that she was not the only one who also journeyed to bring back Rama's dear wife, Sita. 

As the group walked on, the sun in the magical land of Shangri-La set. Just before it finished its arc across the sky, the group came upon a great hill. At the top of this hill stood a small cabin, whose three occupants stood just outside it.

Kausalya's heart leaped as she spotted her son. "Rama! My son, we have come to take you home. Your father, the king, has died, and your brother Bharata wishes for you to take your rightful place on the throne. Come with us, you three, and return to those who love you."

Kausalya squinted in the dim light, as she waited for their reply. She smiled, as she knew they would not refuse, and would join them in the morning for the journey home. "Oh, how nice it will be to be with Rama, Sita, and Lakshman again!" she thought to herself. Her early celebrations did not last long, however.

"I am sorry, Mother," Rama called down from the hill. "I have sworn an oath to fulfill my fourteen years in exile, as have Sita and Lakshman alongside me. It is sad news indeed to hear of my father's passing, but it is my brother Bharata, who must take the throne. I cannot be a good king if I break my word so easily."

"No!" Kausalya thought, as she collapsed in anguish. "He was supposed to say yes!"

"Brother, I cannot take the throne! You know Father wanted it for you. Please, do not make me take your rightful spot!" Bharata answered.

"I am sorry, Bharata. But we cannot go with you," Rama sorrowfully replied.

"Then, I will hold the throne in your absence. But I refuse to hold it a minute longer than the end of your exile. Lend me a pair of your sandals, so that they may rest on your throne as a reminder to all of the true king," was Bharata's response.

And so, the journey that began in happiness for Kausalya and the others ended in Kausalya's devastation as she was forced to leave her son behind in paradise. As they headed back to Ayodhya the next day, suddenly all that was shining and bright was dull and dark to her eyes. And she knew that that is how she would see the world until her son came back again.

Kausalya and Rama.
No Changes Made. By: Gita Press Gorakhpur on 2-10-2018. Source: Wikimedia Commons

Author's Note:

Hello, and thanks for reading! If you read my reading notes over Part A of The Divine Archer, then it is likely no mystery for you what I based Devastation in Shangri-La on. But, I am assuming you probably didn't read my reading notes (I don't think anyone reads others reading notes?) so I will now explain the basis for my story! When I read Part A of Archer, I loved the description of the giant hill that Rama, Sita, and Lakshman lived on with many different kinds of animals, and I wondered what the people of Ayodhya thought of this harmonious place. More than that, however, the mention of so many animals living together in harmony reminded me of the tale of Shangri-La, a fictional place where animals and people live together in peace. I thought it might be interesting to expand on that and tell a story where Queen Kausalya (because I love writing in a female character's point of view) was journeying to bring her son home, and instead of just one giant hill being peaceful, I decided to have them go into the magical world of Shangri-La. I actually based my version of Shangri-La on the version that is present in Colleen Houck's Tiger's Quest, the second book in the Tiger's Curse Saga that I have talked about on my blog before. The last piece was the title, and I really liked the juxtaposition with the word "devastation" and the connotations Shangri-La gives off, of peace and harmony. And that all together is how I came up with this story!

Bibliography:

The Divine Archer by F. J. Gould in 1911. Link: Internet Archive

"Shangri-La". Link: Wikipedia

Tiger's Quest by Colleen Houck on 5-7-2013. Link: Amazon

Tuesday, March 16, 2021

Reading Notes: The Divine Archer, Part B

After finishing The Divine Archer, I think I can say that I like it for different reasons than I liked the Tiny Tales from the Ramayana version. In this version, there are less teachable moments and elaborations, and it is strictly the story. It definitely made for quicker reading, however.

The part that stuck out to me the most was Sita's devotion to her husband after having to live and raise her sons in exile for many years. Even though she had suffered and was frail, she still went to Ayodhya and looked at Rama with love. I do not think I would still love Rama if I were in her shoes. I guess it just depends on the person, but I would've felt betrayed by Rama. Especially since he's supposed to be such a great person.

I think it would be interesting to see a Sita who has completely grown independent. She maybe has a fondness for Rama, but I don't think I would want to see her still love him, if only for how she loves herself and he wouldn't trust her. He doesn't deserve her devotions. I would rewrite the ending, and have Sita just maybe not even go to Ayodhya. She would have lived a happy life, instead of suffering, and would maybe have died peacefully or even found a new lover.

I just want to see more strong independent women!

Sita and Hanuman.
No Changes Made. By: Gita Press Gorakhpur on 2-10-2018. Source: Wikimedia Commons

Bibliography:

The Divine Archer by F. J. Gould in 1911. Link: Internet Archive

Monday, March 15, 2021

Reading Notes: The Divine Archer, Part A

Since I took a break in Week 5 and enjoyed the Ramayana more than the Mahabharata, I decided to read The Divine Archer by F.J. Gould for this week's reading. At the end of Part A, I think I might even like this version of the Ramayana the best so far! Despite having some holes in it, such as the reason King Dasharatha owing Queen Kaikeyi two boons being unexplained, I thought the story moved faster, which I liked.

The part of Part A that stood out to me the most was the scene where Bharata, Queen Kausalya, and the people of Ayodhya came upon Sita, Rama, and Lakshman on the holy-hill of Chitra-Kuta. I don't remember the exiles being on a hill with peaceful animals in the Tiny Tales version, but I could be just forgetting things. I really liked this part because it reminded me about Shangri-La.

The holy-hill was described on page 33 akin to a paradise, with beautiful trees and rocks around, and all manner of animals living in harmony with the three humans. I think it would be cool to maybe write this scene from one of the animals point of views, maybe one of the tigers or elephants? Or from the point of view of the Queen. She does not have anything from her point of view in the Ramayana, so that could be interesting.

My other favorite parts of this section were how beautifully Sita was described. The imagery by F.J. Gould was really amazing!

View of Shangri-La Resort, on the Lower Kachura Lake.
No Changes Made. By: Monibaba68 on 8-4-2016. Source: Wikimedia Commons

Bibliography

The Divine Archer by F. J. Gould in 1911. Link: Internet Archive

"Shangri-La". Link: Wikipedia

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